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11/19 2019

conclusin
summary
(four main points each from the 4 sections)
conclusion
(why people should care)
limitations


On this day we talked about writing the conclusion paragraph for our brochure. Our group first started working on the summary and each thought of the most prime part of their section. We combined all four of the points and created a summary section for the conclusion paragraph. moreover, by adding the consequences of the problems, we were able to express that people should care more and how big of a deal it is. For the limitation section, we talked about what we were not able to do and what improvements were needed. The last sentence of the final paragraph should be impressive and leave the reader with a feeling that they need to do something.

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