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5 paragraph essay use the sentences from the group introduction and conclusion include the 3 paragraphs from the brochure for the body paragraphs the 3 body paragraphs each need 3 points, reasons, topics. each body paragraph needs at least one reference. = at least 3 references per person. On this day, we worked mainly on preparing for our 5 paragraph essays and improving on the 3rd presentation that we will be having. We discussed what improvements we need, in order to grab the audience's interest.  I need to improve on making my body paragraphs longer since there are not enough sentences. Moreover, finding more references for each point is also something I need to work on. Mr.Paterson mentioned how as we get older there should be more references for each point.  I decided to start researching for new information to put in my body paragraphs during class.