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5/13 2019

topic sentence
topic claim
unified paragraphs
each paragraph has one theme and one idea
blog posts should have 2-3 paragraphs
each paragraph 8-11 sentences
three different kinds of topic sentences.
writing for we rather than me

Today, i was able to realize quite a few things. When Mr. Paterson talked about how we should write our blog posts for "we" not "me" i realized that by writing a blog post for other people to understand, i would write certain topics more precisely so that it is understandable. He also mentioned how good bloggers, searchers and other professionals write unified paragraphs. My first thought was that writing one paragraph for one topic would be difficult since we would have to devise many ideas. However, i understood at the end, that when a whole paragraph is dedicated to one topic, it allows the idea to be more persuasive and lets the readers have various thoughts about the theme.

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